Jennifer E. Thomas (j3nny3lf) wrote,
Jennifer E. Thomas

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Invitation wording

In the midst of the redecorating and all the other stuff going on, Sam and I are beginning to plan our church wedding celebration. I'm struggling with invitation wording. Here's what I've got so far, and it seems bulky to me:

It is with joy that we,
Bonnie, Andrew, America, Sean, Ian and Evan
invite you to share
in a celebration of love
at the blessing of the marriage of our parents
Jennifer Ellen McWhorter
Samuel Preston McWhorter
on Saturday, the fifth of October
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
Ponder United Methodist Church
Ponder, Texas
Luau immediately following

We want the kids on there. At first I had all of their last names but that was WAY too bulky.

Any thoughts? This is lacking something. Heart, maybe. Also, ignore the date on that, I pulled it out of my left ear just as a placeholder.
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